literature

Believe Me

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What do I have to do...
to convince you, 'You're Beautiful'?
How can I make you feel...
as sexy as I think you are?

When I look in your eyes
all the pain goes away.
When you walk in the room
you instantly brighten my day.

There is so much of you that is sexy,
Size of your body, Curves of your waist
The smell of your hair...
And even the way that you taste.

I could hold you forever...
Keep my arms wrapped tight.
I long to see you smile,
for you to give up this fight.

Why can't you just believe,
what I keep trying to say?
You are absolutely beautiful,
in so many different ways.

© WiccanWT - November 2, 2010 5:49am
This is my attempt, to try something new. My attempt was to put myself in my friends head, and write a poem, as if I were him, Instead of me.
© 2010 - 2024 WiccanWT
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Mezxine's avatar
First amazing attempt. I couldn't even write half beautiful as that in my 10th time.

Lovely. :3